Droplets

i was in a mood to write

A single crystal shape droplet of determination trickled desperately down the clear, shining glass of the window.  Soon to join its other siblings in the pool of pointlessness on the window pane, born for the reason of racing to do nothing more than entertain the children of the world on the depressing day that they created.

Author's Note

I was just in a mood to write, this has no point
just simply for reason
why not

Reviews

[gcp]

aww this is sweet - there's something kinda hypnotic about racing raindrops down the window - nice to be indoors on a rainy day.

[Diasha]

It was cute ^^
I liked it

[oh,hey.]

thank you

[Rebecca Dias]

rain drops racing on a windshield? This is my childhood. Amazing writing!

[oh,hey.]

thank you, hahaa

[enigmaticme]

that made me smile:)

[Shannen Forrester]

raindrop races!!! I used to love doing this so it's strange to see it used in such a sad manner, but the message is poignant and thought provoking even if it makes me sad to think of them in this way :)

[skyelight]

Like the use of diction and imagery in this one Great job on such a simple write!

[Marie]

Very good micro fiction.

[Zap-the-awesome]

I love it! So simple yet completely relatable and true!