Droplets

i was in a mood to write

A single crystal shape droplet of determination trickled desperately down the clear, shining glass of the window.  Soon to join its other siblings in the pool of pointlessness on the window pane, born for the reason of racing to do nothing more than entertain the children of the world on the depressing day that they created.

Author's Note

I was just in a mood to write, this has no point
just simply for reason
why not

Reviews

[Poetic Beauty]

This is done simply with great word choices. Raindrops on depressing days do allow the mind to calm and imagination soar. That is what I saw when I read this piece.

[Jayden Ireton]

The pool of pointlessness. That just stuck to me. I liked the depressing edge to the story.

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thankyou

[EChaps]

Nice concept, great imagery!

[quinfinn]

gorgeous imagery....very skillfully written! i am impressed.

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thankyou

[Moniba]

Beautifully written...

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aw thank you

[T. Greyman]

Four lines to tell something so important and so beautiful.
Amazing

[Summer'sBreeze]

Wow, beautiful write. :)

[oh,hey.]

thankyou, I didnt realise it woud get so much positive feedback

[Summer'sBreeze]

No prob. ^-^
You're a wonderful writer. I'll have to check out more of your work.

[oh,hey.]

That means a lot, since my english teacher seems to have no faith in me. You've made my day.

[Summer'sBreeze]

Well, your english teacher is overlooking a great writer to be.
Keep up the good work!

[Akleja]

It's amazing how such a little amount of words can invoke so many feelings... It's so beautiful!

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aw, thankyou

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Beautiful...simple but captivating.

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thankyou for reviewing

[R. L. Ives]

Natures way of saying " I'm sorry I have a job to do, but you can still have fun. Just use your imagination." Which you simply did. Very nice writing.

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thank you