Droplets

Droplets

A Story by oh,hey.
"

i was in a mood to write

"

A single crystal shape droplet of determination trickled desperately down the clear, shining glass of the window.  Soon to join its other siblings in the pool of pointlessness on the window pane, born for the reason of racing to do nothing more than entertain the children of the world on the depressing day that they created.

© 2013 oh,hey.


Author's Note

oh,hey.
I was just in a mood to write, this has no point
just simply for reason
why not

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This is done simply with great word choices. Raindrops on depressing days do allow the mind to calm and imagination soar. That is what I saw when I read this piece.

Posted 11 Years Ago


The pool of pointlessness. That just stuck to me. I liked the depressing edge to the story.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

oh,hey.

11 Years Ago

thankyou
Nice concept, great imagery!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

gorgeous imagery....very skillfully written! i am impressed.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

oh,hey.

11 Years Ago

thankyou
Beautifully written...

Posted 11 Years Ago


oh,hey.

11 Years Ago

aw thank you
Four lines to tell something so important and so beautiful.
Amazing

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow, beautiful write. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Summer'sBreeze

11 Years Ago

No prob. ^-^
You're a wonderful writer. I'll have to check out more of your work.
oh,hey.

11 Years Ago

That means a lot, since my english teacher seems to have no faith in me. You've made my day.
Summer'sBreeze

11 Years Ago

Well, your english teacher is overlooking a great writer to be.
Keep up the good work!
It's amazing how such a little amount of words can invoke so many feelings... It's so beautiful!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

oh,hey.

11 Years Ago

aw, thankyou
Beautiful...simple but captivating.

Posted 11 Years Ago


oh,hey.

11 Years Ago

thankyou for reviewing
Natures way of saying " I'm sorry I have a job to do, but you can still have fun. Just use your imagination." Which you simply did. Very nice writing.





Posted 11 Years Ago


oh,hey.

11 Years Ago

thank you

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Added on March 8, 2013
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Tags: droplets, short, simple, children, pointless, story

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oh,hey.

Cambs, Peterborough, United Kingdom



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