Dream Disease

Another poem...of him...

 

Never before,

Have my dreams been so dark,

Of the one I love.

 

Though their timing is wrong,

As you are gone,

From all but my mind.

 

You shall never truly leave.

No, you’re my disease.

Is there a cure?

 

If there is,

Would I take it?

Would I want it?

 

Will this hurt me more?

Will this spread?

Will this kill?

                           

Author's Note

I think I could do more with this...perhaps I can create a song from it...

Reviews

[tamilynnyea;.]

that wasreally good.
"Would I take it?
Would I want it?"
the best anddeepest lines throughout the entirething.=)
loved itt,

[Shadow of Sunshine]

i really liked it, for me it's really hard to write poetry that rhymes, and have it still sound good...so good job

[Sarah J Dhue]

hm

[Owl City]

toll i like it