Heavens door

About a loved one and the journey through the pain of loss to see they are still watching and waiting

I put up a struggle
I put up a fight

To win
For Victory

This time i new i was right

All the pain
The hurt
The anger

The tears that surrounded me
Became me

Now no more

After all these years
Im breaking free

For this isn't what you would want for me
From me
Not the person you saw in me

When you carried me
Gave birth to me

Loved Cherished Cared

I'm becoming me

The fight was bad
Felt like war

For I was battered
Bruised
Aching
Tired
Sore

Since that day
You got the calling

The call
To heavens door.

For to me what i do see
that shouldn't have been

For you were still needed
Wanted and more

But one thing the fight has taught me
and your love to

is fight for what you believe
For that is the way to achieve
the recognition you deserve

For the great things you did
whilst you used up
your short time on earth

But to this day
and for ever more
I know
You will be watching over me
and
Waiting for me

From your own
Heavens door.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[KAOlmsted]

A touching tribute to your mother. Very well done. Thank you so much for sharing this with us.