MMM.

About a tasty treat

Here i sit in front of you
your mouth starts to water
your mind goes into an excitement fit
your eyes drill into my wholeness

Here i lie between 2 slices of bread
no butter lies on them

instead of clothes
I'm dressed in a saucy gloop
that drips all over me

to make me look bright
they sprinkle me with salad
and and yucky gherkin
a slice of cheese
or two

over comes the hands
grab me whole
then there it comes

the deep dark whole
i don't like this anymore

then you take a bite
a chew
or maybe a few
a breath
then gone
swallowed

I was a burger
now I'm gone

They say I'm heaven
then
I'm gone to heaven

Author's Note

Just say what you think

Reviews

[Dr. Wood ?]

if there IS a burger heaven...Oh what pictures that conjures up.....This was also very good

[Ellejune]

I was writing about my dinner

[Annie Knox]

you made me feel hungry now i have to go look for food.

[Ellejune]

sorry

[Annie Knox]

its okay mum bought biscuits so hunger is good.

[Ellejune]

oh good

[David Scott]

This may the the beginning of an eating disorder...? ha
Try a salad.

[Ellejune]

what?

[David Scott]

Just kidding...;-)

[Ellejune]

ok

[KAOlmsted]

I think you're crazy ;-) In a very, very good way.

:-D

[Ellejune]

why thankyou