Animal crew

Animal crew

A Poem by Ellejune
"

Something random i thought of

"
There was a women that lived in a zoo
She ate lunch with the animal crew

A monkey ate nuts
and scratched his own butt

So up came her dinner she threw
Phew

© 2013 Ellejune


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Ellejune
I no its not great but say what you think

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lol. honestly. not great. but good try. you coulda add in a few more lines too. it too short. hope you dont get angry with me for saying this.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Ellejune

11 Years Ago

I wont ever get angry at people for giving their honest opinion that's how you grow and get better (.. read more

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Added on January 3, 2013
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Ellejune
Ellejune

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