Cloud

Cloud

A Poem by Ellejune
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Relating a cloud to life.

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Life is like a fluffy cloud
Floating along
At it's own pace
Singing it's own song

All fluffy
Full of air

A personality
A face

Crying like us
Screaming like us
Dreaming like us

Poof
Gone like us

© 2013 Ellejune


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Ellejune
Not my greatest but say what you think

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Wow. Short and sweet, but it really gets the point across. All of my short poems end up being extremely cliche. This is awesome! I never thought of that metaphor. I think the length of the poem also speaks to the last stanza. Just like us, the clouds and the poem disappear before our very eyes. Great work! Keep writing!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ellejune

11 Years Ago

Thankyou



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You write pretty good poems. short and to the point and sweet. i like it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Ellejune

11 Years Ago

Thankyou
A personification of cloud beautifully done....

Posted 11 Years Ago


Wow. Short and sweet, but it really gets the point across. All of my short poems end up being extremely cliche. This is awesome! I never thought of that metaphor. I think the length of the poem also speaks to the last stanza. Just like us, the clouds and the poem disappear before our very eyes. Great work! Keep writing!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ellejune

11 Years Ago

Thankyou

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Ellejune
Ellejune

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