The Expedition

We can build inventions --

Boats on the ocean,

Shuttles to a new land,

To a new idea

That meets us

With determination.

It calls out

Like northern geese

In migration,

But remains only

For a moment.

Reviews

[Wórdsmíth]

well, that's an amazin' one man. I liked few words. You got me man. This's you know a piece..yeah it is a nice piece.
Beautifully expressed. well written

[River Goats]

Thank you for your comments. I appreciate it.

[Gabe]

I like the first line the best. I always think of inventions as being invented but never built for some reason. It's very lyrical and could also be a song. Nice little poem.

[River Goats]

Interesting, because I built the poem around that line. Thank you for the review and kind words.