Moonbeam Night

Shades of blue hover through

the moonbeam sliced on my face,

as I watched those meteors shower

and their little lights cascade with grace.

My eyes flickered with pictures still in my mind

and a lost pathway,

went through the wilderness

but to nowhere did it lay.

The enchanted lake past 

those sleepy thickets,

where a sublime sky and a silhouetted horizon, 

again they met.

I stood by the window

which mirrored my hazy face -

I saw right through those  misty eyes,

which saw right through me.

The chilly breeze swept past by

 and the soft dream clouds drifted away,

the moonbeam shone all bright

bringing hope that will begin another day.

Author's Note

Thanks for reading and - please review!

Reviews

[Mockingbird]

it's an interesting image how you saw right through your reflection's eyes, and the reflection of yourself saw right through you. it's kind of eerie. overall i enjoyed the poem; very beautiful imagery.

[Lawrence Parlier]

Beautiful imagery and rhyme!!! Nice piece!

[Galagarian Humor]

Very well done. You have a short and sweet poem, I like it. I look forward to reading more poems like this some more in the future.

[Amata Luna]

This is a nice poem. A very good poem to start with. I like the way you used the words to create pictures. Keep up the good work!

[Sahar moonlight]

This was so heartfelt poem!
Moonbeam Night, full of feelings.
I absolutely loved your poem!
looking forward to read more :)