Pagan Allure

Brevity on the nocturnal goddess Nyx, ten words exactly.

Cosmic crown, 

regal smokes,

over the abyss Nyx tiptoes,
weightless.

Author's Note

Written for the category "Most simple" of the Category Writing Contest. Thanks for checking it out :)

Reviews

[WitchyWiccan)0(]

Gasp. Nyx is my Goddess! The poem is beautiful

[Gregory Stires]

love the poem. i like how in such a short poem it has great imagery and it makes me see nyx dancing in the sky with a veil of stars as she brings night to world.

[Alexanda Corrin]

Nice poem. I do like its simplicity and interesting title! Great imagery even though it's only a short poem, I can almost see Nyx dancing around!