I know

errrr, couldnt resist it... had to rant in a poem and let out all those bad feelings..

This isnt anything new to me
Just your basic old school fantasy
Think I dont know
What is this too you? A show
Well big news buddy, Ive watched this one
Just another re-run
Used to bother me
Now its just fun
I know the truth
The secret is loose
Its as easy to see
as your broken tooth

Reviews

[Nicholas Antonio Young]

This was pretty awesome. Sometimes it's even harder to put such a built-up feeling into a short work. I really liked it, very creative.

[Lina Grey]

Everyone needs to rant every now and then. This wasn't too much on that, though. Great write, with nice rhyming and a fast beat. Thank you.

[Michael Opoku-Addo]

Amazing poem. You never fail to produce a good poem. Don't worry, you didn't rant too much.