Ivorene

Symbolic "statues" or the perfect humans connecting emotionally to the nature of the world

Porcelain Ivory and statuesque, they stand stiff and cold, peaking over gray.

Their skin remains pale and fragile like white parchment on glass. They bathe in sweet lilac and cry tears of bittersweet sugar.

Their marble touch pricks the skin up to my shoulders.

The wind that blows is as hollow as their mouth that beseeches them.

They swallow the ivory that flushes their cheeks, the rose color that leaves their lips, and the fair skin that remains cool.

They swim through ponds of Ivorene and lilac oil, and slumber in waves of silk.

 

Reviews

[Heather Clayton]

To me it's like your talking about statues or something. I really liked the use of your language in this poem. Very thought-provoking.

[Khal Attero]

This one can be also themed as a Nightwish type of a song! Love the way you write, simlply wonderful!

[Tomislav Petricevic]

Deep and fascinating, I enjoyed every word of it. It seems so mystical and creatively expressed!

[The Jay]

Intrinsically wonderful.

[khalid]

although i cant get what ivorene is, i have even looked it up in the dictionary but still coudnt find it, your poem sounds really nice