One Night Fall

really short poem as an assignment for my writing class,we had to write a love poem so,i took to an under tone of an erotic romance...very subtly;also reflects my thoughts of this year and more.

A fervor in your moan,

And a tender heat in your sigh.

A fervor in your kiss,

An everlasting moment in your high…

A romance meant forever,

But only for tonight,

One night, atop your stargaze manor,

In your hold,

So fervent and warm,

An ardor passion

Meant only for our eyes.

Author's Note

In my mind i wrote about 2 men falling in love as result of an affair... just inspired by an amazing 30+ story i recently read.

Reviews

[Another Poet]

I really like this one, so good!

[Wórdsmíth]

That's pretty interestin' ...ain't it...??
as ya said that you inspired by 30+'s story's...that's nice too, i read out sth unique.
An ardor passion
Meant only for our eyes....these two lines're pretty one's, words're powerful in each line. great one, i think you inspired deeply..lol....well written

[Coyote Poetry]

Great description and good use of words. A passionate journey in the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[khalid]

i liked how you have penned this. nice words picking and sweet images. i loved the music flowing through the lines..i have really enjoyed reading this..