Floating

very short poem yet again. I wrote this for my creative writing class. The theme was floating.

I'm Floating on the edge of humanity.

The crystalized water lining along my body.

I waited for this moment when i would be 

cast into a drowning shore,

blue and azure...

the endless depth of an abyss.

My Skin is still floating.

My eyes are filmed over; very opaque.

I listened for the water to sing to me 

and blacken my ears.

I waited so very long for when finally i would 

sink below that crystalized lining,

never to float again.

Reviews

[khalid]

really really very nice poem inspite of the pain reflected in every line of the poem...
i have really enjoyed reading it.
thank you for sharing

[Aehr]

beautiful imagery! This one cast a spell upon me! well done :)

[Allycat]

Excellent write! I love the imagery in this :D
"I'm floating on the edge of humanity"
very unique and very creative!