Uncomprehensible

A little weak, but it was an afterthought from the poem "Shadow Lover"

My greatest fear

Is my darkest desire

But do I fear the desire itself

Or the fact that I desire it?

I wish I could understand.

But Dark Desires

Grow Dark Dreams

And Fear robs us

Of our pleasures

All of this escapes deeper comprehension

For me

It simply

Is

Author's Note

Like I said before, It's kinda weak, but tell me what you honestly think.

Reviews

[Rusty]

Great food for thought. Again Thank You.

[Wretched Knight]

Unless you did it on purpose, it’s Incomprehensible and not Uncomprehensible. I really like the subject of one’s greatest fear is their darkest desire. I could see you doing more on this poem. It really made me stop and think. Good job.