Undying

Kinda twisted, but a symbol of eternal love

The shroud of the man

I Used to love

Is the cloak I wore

To my wedding

"How Twisted!"

They said

As I walked down the Aisle

But they didn't know

That my love still lived on

Till the Groom turned around

And grinned out at the crowd

A beautiful corpse

With a daunting smile

Reached out to take my hand

The shroud, you see

Was a symbol of love

Of my Undying commitment

To this Undying man

Author's Note

Ok, how disturbing is it, and is it any good? Be HONEST!

Reviews

[Revery]

I like how you brought that around. Great job

[luna11]

Wow this is great XD
It's very well written, although I don't think the font fits with the poem.
Anyway, great poem
xx

[TheMostSplendiferous]

I don't really find it disturbing, but I liked it. The word "isle" should have been "aisle." If you keep it as isle, you're talking about an island.

haha I don't find it disturbing, I actually like it! Though it is a little creepy! Keep up the good work!