The Sin of Vanity

Very different and very random, kind of crazy

Run run

As fast as you can

You know I’ll never catch you

Or so you know

You think you know

But I know that I can

 

From black to white

To blue to crimson

See the many colored stains

They’re drying now

On someone’s curtains

The image straight from

Your shattered brain

 

All the pretty lies you’ve told

All the whispers

Cried in vain

Drown now in your amber solace

Sap pours down

Like poisoned rain

 

Crystal clear

The world becomes

Or so you know

You think you know

And now we find out

All your secrets

The ones that you

Would never show

Author's Note

Its really odd, but it's a lot closer to what i've been writing lately and it just kinda came to me on the spot... what do you think?

Reviews

[KeeD]

I'm so shocked i haven't read this one before, I love it.. it's so strong and powerful and has the right punch to it.

[Elizabeth Porterfield]

Thank you keegan

[luna11]

Wow.. There's something really powerful about this.

"All the pretty lies you’ve told
All the whispers
Cried in vain
Drown now in your amber solace
Sap pours down
Like poisoned rain"

Really interesting and beautifully written :)

[Elizabeth Porterfield]

Thank you so very much:) I'm glad that somebody responded to this piece:) I have to ask though, when you read it, what did you specifically feel?