Loves Flames

Love is not just about the action and the word means nothing if there is no true feeling behind it...

Dying embers

Burning flames

Cold Decembers

Wintery lanes

Inspiration

Spikes the mind

Seeking warmth

You'll never find

But words come easy

Soft and sweet

They cling like snow

When lovers meet

Then temporary

Satisfaction

But your too caught up

In the action

You never think

To look around

And find the love

That I have found

For love is more than just a word

Or even just a pleasure

It is freedom, light, and peace

And hope beyond all measure

Author's Note

It just came to me while I was here... I don't even have it written down in my notebook yet... What do you think?

Reviews

[DemitriJ]

I must say I love it. I see your means of inspiration. Just remember to live your life in moments, the good or the bad, for if you look at it as a whole, it taints the good memories with the bad and you look down at everything.

[Elizabeth Porterfield]

Thanks sis:)

[skyelight]

It feels like... Like I can definitely relate to it. Gotta love the poetry-in-the-moment!

[Elizabeth Porterfield]

I know right:) I'm glad you get it:) And thank you:)

[skyelight]

Totally! I get those random got-to-write-down-that-poem too and it's weird how they're waaay better than the poems I actually think through. You get that a lot too?

[Elizabeth Porterfield]

Yes!!!!!!! That's why most of my poetry on here has somewhere, "Just a random thought" The power of random thinking is amazing!!!!

[skyelight]

I know right!!! Same here! :D

[Rekain]

Someone's feeling happy. ;)

[Elizabeth Porterfield]

lol:) I actually am, really happy:) I just wish that other people would look at love the way I see it. It's not just about sex and you can't just say the word if you don't mean it because then it's just pointless:)

[Rekain]

If you had a tail......anyways, I get what you mean and I agree. People don't know love sometimes until it's too late.

[Elizabeth Porterfield]

If I had a tail, yes, it would be wagging Rekain:) I got it so you didn't have to say it:) and it's good to know someone else sees it:)