Cut Like A Razor

A song about fighting back against the people who cut you down

Verse 1

A bloodred sky

Above your head

A darklit flood in your eyes

You think you're so strong

But now you're so dead (to me)

I will no longer live by your lies

 

Chorus

Try to raze me

(Cut me down)

You wont faze me

(I won't drown)

I'm amazed you still think you can hurt me

Now I'll show you

Just what I can do

You'll regret that I remembered you

 

Verse 2

A starlit sky

Now turns to black

And I know that I cannot go back

I've gone too far

To let you

Tear me down again

 

Chorus

 

Verse 3

So you fall

Into the darkness

That surrounds you

Not at all

What you thought

We would become

 

Chorus

You'll regret that I remembered you

Author's Note

What is in parenthasis is just supposed to be screamed, what is underlined is supposed to be screamed and sung. What do you think of it? Be honest:)

Reviews

[luna11]

Sang this in my head, and it makes a really good song:) The kind of thing I'd listen to.

[Elizabeth Porterfield]

thank you very much Luna:) I'm glad you like it:)

[DemitriJ]

I remember singing this with you, I just wish I could scream it like I used to. This has always been one of my favorites as you don't write very much screamo.

[Elizabeth Porterfield]

Yeah, I remember it too:) I might be able to do it right now cause my voice is still screwed up, but I'd wrather not try at this moment, as I'm in study hall:) Lols:)

[Britt]

This is good, it sounds like it would be a good song. Are you gonna upload a video of yourself singing it or something? that would be neat:P

[Elizabeth Porterfield]

Maybe:) if I can find someone to help me with the screemo parts. I can't scream:( My fiance can though, so if he and I can see each other soon, then maybe:)

[Britt]

ooh, well i hope you post something soon:P good job with the lyrics though:)

[Elizabeth Porterfield]

Thanks:)

[Rekain]

Love the lyrics though I can only hear how I think it should be not from your perspective. Still it's amazing.

[Elizabeth Porterfield]

Thanks!!!! If I can, maybe I'll record it on my friends phone and then upload the recording on the author's note. Then you can hear how it's supposed to sound from my perspective.