Would You Believe?

Would You Believe?

A Poem by Elizabeth Porterfield
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Another poem about the man I love.

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I'm craving your company

Your conversation soothing me

My hand warm in yours

And your lips soft on mine

I can't believe how crazy

The thought of you makes me

I need you beside me

I'll cross every line

When fire meets fire

Thats how I'll define

The depth of my love for you

And the intensity

But would you believe me

If I told you

Just how I feel

Or would you think me

Fake and unreal

© 2012 Elizabeth Porterfield


Author's Note

Elizabeth Porterfield
I actually sent this to him an a text message and I just about cried at how he responded. Any way, tell me what you think?

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I love it. I wish someone would send something like that to me. I hope the cry was as good one and not a bad cry.

Posted 12 Years Ago


It would be a wonderful note to receive. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Elizabeth Porterfield
Elizabeth Porterfield

Butlerville, AR



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I have written and love lots of dark and depressing writing, although my friends call me chipper.... I usually am a pretty happy person unless you piss me off:) I'm twenty years old and trying to figu.. more..

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