Word drawn universe

All in painted colors.

I keep having these visions
of stars dancing through the night sky, alive with color.
Deep blues and lush violets.
And the galaxies and nebulas all swirl together,
with planets large enough to count their rings.

And all the while the stars dance,
and dance.
Like little people with arms and legs.
Shining, shining,
like the glow of a thousand smiles.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

did you mean "shining, shining"?

i like this...appears as just a star gazing...but i see it as people of all colors joining hands across the sky...and being one light.

[Melissa Rose]

I love that you picked up on that. To me people are stars, all shining in the same sky, and sharing the same destiny.

[zainul]

Wonderful imagination of an artist.
Very well penned.
Check the spelling:Shinning

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Nicely written...reminds me a little of one I recently posted called "Event Horizon". I was in a "star exploration" mood. There is something about the night sky, and the things that we know are out there, but we cannot see, that is just intoxicating to me. Well done.

[The Nude Writer]

This is strikingly beautiful :) Well written :)

[Melissa Rose]

Tank you. =D

[Eryn ♪]

Lovely imagery. Good job.

[Melissa Rose]

Thank you very much. I'm glade you enjoyed it.