Red

Red

A Poem by Evie
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My attempt at describing the colour red as a person. Enjoy, loves! xo Evie.

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R E D
That Red,
bossy, always on top of the others,
self-centered, jealous.
She throws punches,
that Red,
big, fat punches.
When she speaks it's best to step away,
because she spits the juice
of bitter cranberries,
and speaks the words of a 
rotting pomegranite.
That Red,
always showy,
and looking for attention.
I wish she would quiet down
for a while
and not be so . . .
red.

                    - xo Evie

© 2018 Evie


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I like it. Is it meant to personify just the color red or an attribute of an actual person?

Posted 6 Years Ago


I found it funny and cool!!! Super!!! write on yellow.😊

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Evie

6 Years Ago

Thanks!
Yellow is such a nice colour! I can already imagine what he's like! :)
Was interesting and was well written. You gave red, story and history. Thank you Evie for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This......! This is your best work yet. It has humour and power. This is poetry in motion! It rocks on so many levels! Love it! Well done!

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Evie

Ontario, Canada



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