Closed

Closed

A Poem by frnd

 

I am something that others may throw away.

 Uncared for, I am closed

Off and slowly turn gray.

 

To love I have never been exposed.

 A world of me is all I know, 

 Where no one else has thought to impose.

 

Fading away so agonizingly slow!

 I simply wait for death

 To deal me its final blow. 

© 2010 frnd


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Love the rhyme scheme. Form does not slow this piece down. It provides feeling; morbid somewhat, but all it has to do is make a reader feel something.

Thanks for sharing.

Markymark

Posted 15 Years Ago


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I am looking for a way to express what I feel; I need some kind of a way to be free of all that cluters my mind. For this I turn to writing as well as reading. I love to be outside and find the beauty.. more..

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