~ Neon Night Street

~ Neon Night Street, Elisa Laura, SciFi, Dreams, Fantasy, Neon, Blue, You and Me, Us, The World, Elysion

~ Neon Night Street

 

 

Dark waves, colored curls,

Dancing music, light waves

Flashy lampposts, and - you and me

 

Hinged doors, glass walls,

Neon windows, manipulated

Food, and - you and me

 

Dancing bubbles, foolish people

Tormented drunk mutants

All by themselves, so too, - you and I

 

But you and me,

In the dead of this night,

Could both deeply see the Neon lightning

 

Between dreamland and reality

On each other's skin, where we dreamed

All so blue, in Neon, Night street

 

Electrocuted...

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Enjoy - xx - :)

Reviews

[joshua deathdealer]

All the wilds of the nightlife are painted here beautifully. The excitement, the sounds and the colors. All infused together and ripping apart while in the middle moves your love and you. Together, in unison, experiencing it all. Or maybe this scene is merely experiencing you and your love.

The blending mix here is awesome. I loved the executing final word and the music..of course. xo

Your reviews make me so happy! esp. after a busy day ;) you know what I mean lol xoxo
Thank you with whole my heart dear, it's time to be in Neon Night street soon ;)

[Dream Weaver]

A dreamscape worthy of a surrealist equivalent to euphoria...
Well done young lady! ;)

If there would be one, who would get it, it would be you Dream Weaver... thank you my buddy for your wonderful review -x- :)

[Dream Weaver]

Always my pleasure E. L. :) x

Thank you so much again buddy -x- :)

[Inda]

Fantastic! I love how this sort o feels like a riding a bike up and dow a hillside. Lots of ups and downs in terms of the visuals and emotions envoked, really enjoyed it!

Thank you so much for peeking in on this electric dream I had lately.... :) your words are always treasured my friend... -x-

[Deuces]

I get the feeling of peace, serenity and passion between two people in the midst of chaos. That the connection can overpower anything and everything surrounding the two. I really loved this and think the title was very cool.

Thank you so much, I love your interpretation... :) It was a dream, I had, and you really help me analyze there, dear... :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Oh your words are so eloquent and heart warming, you are leaving the hopeless romantic in me breathless.

Thank you my sweet friend, your words mean the world always! :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You are very welcome hon, reading your art is always a pleasure.

I feel so happy you like my work. Thank you Dale :) once again.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

what a happy way to die...electrocuted with a lover...under the neon lights...and flashy lampposts...

this poem is electric...i like the playing on the phrasing "you and me" and then switching to "you and i"

nicely done my friend.

Thank you dearly Jacob, for being here my friend.... :) your thoughts, are always valued here.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

WOW!... such an Electric vibe.... it has a stirring effect...
The music is enchanting, as well...
I felt a hypnotic wave of energy coursing through every line, this piece certainly comes alive...
An intoxicating write, Sis.. NICE!~xoxoxo~;)

And a WOW to your reply here love, fantastic.... I am so so happy you entered this realm of a dream I had.... -xxxx- So happy always with your thoughts Sissy!

[Eric Pudalov]

Elisa, my friend - I always enjoy the fantastic journey into your vivid world!! And it's clear, from the way you describe it, that you share the experiences of this world with another, or with several others.

There are many cryptic elements to this, which is another thing I enjoy very much. For example, I particularly love the "Hinged doors, glass walls/Neon windows, manipulated/Food, and - you and me." It's as if you're walking through a hallucinatory world with a lover, or a friend, and only the two of you understand it.

It reminds me of the film "Enter the Void" by Gaspar Noe, in which a young man is murdered and his soul enters another dimension in the afterlife. I'm certain that there is more to the universe than what we currently see in front of us, and you have described a part of that.

Eric, my dear friend, just another superb review from you, I can't thank you enough lately for the great support. I will not forget. Plus all the sweet messages, towards my family relative. I'm so happy you enjoyed this piece, it came out of my mind, in this hectic periode... (to release) in my dreams maybe... (actually it was a nightmare lol) didn't wrote it as harsh as it honestly was, not to scare my readers LOL.... will tell you the dream one day! :) thank you so much.

[Eric Pudalov]

I would love to hear about the dream one day (when you have some free time)! I haven't been on Skype lately. Hope you're doing a bit better...I know things can get crazy.

We will talk about that soon... and other things, also our work that still needs to be done he he... :D can't wait. Me either, too busy I was... but I will soon. Take much care ok... ((YOU)).

[Raymond Federle]

A wonderful sense of controlled free-fall into electric night. Excellent!

Aaah buddy thank you for saying so...................... yay! you get me! :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A very nice journey in your words.
"But you and me,
In the dead of this night,
Could both deeply see the Neon lightning"
Neon lights, good company and time. A good place to land. The strong description took me to good place and visions. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Thank you my beautiful friend... :) your words are a treasure always.