Don't Go.

Feels a little incomplete to me but it's how it came out.

‘Where are you going?’

‘Away.’

‘Why?’

‘Because I must.’

‘Where will you go?’

‘Far away.’

‘You mean from me?’

‘From myself.’

‘And me.’

‘And you.’

‘Don’t go.’

‘Don’t go?’

‘Don’t go.’

‘You don’t mean that.’

‘No, but stay anyway.’

‘Why?’

‘You want this of me.’

‘I do.’

‘So, stay.’

 

There wasn’t much she could say after- not that there wasn’t more to be said. Actions speak louder than words but it’s silence that echoes through reminiscence.

 

 

Author's Note

Follow the poem as said by person A and then Person B, A then B and repeat.

Reviews

[Usman Muhammad]

An impressive write...
You made your point...
Well written....

[Eliot Knight]

Thankyou

[justdandy]

This is AMAZING. I am adding this to my library.

[Eliot Knight]

thanks, I'm glad you liked it.

[Coyote Poetry]

Hard to stop a escaping person.
" ‘From myself.’
‘And me.’
‘And you.’"
I liked the flow of thoughts. You left the reader with a escape and a final goodbye. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Eliot Knight]

thankyou for the comment

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Bear]

Interesting concept, the conversation not being had has more impact on the reader as we fill in our own innuendos for both what is and isn't said. Someone base may find it smutty while someone refine it may be romantic, make one wonder if you are a student of phycology :~)
Well done I like it Clap! Clap! Clap!

[Eliot Knight]

That's an interesting concept. Thanks