Reality of Man.

Don't ever say sorry for how you feel.

Felt.

Feel.

Because it was real.

To you now, or at least then

when your eyes burnt them.

Yes, you were angry.

I know you feel guilty.

But you're human.

and as Hu-men

they will understand

that you are not a brand

of artificial intelligence

without evidence 

of our relevance

to our inheritance 

of the skeletons that have lived before us.

You are alive and you celebrate our trust

with forgiveness.

Man's only weakness

is himself.

And your selfless baptism of fire

will give you your wholesome wealth.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree with the logic in the poem.
"Man's only weakness
is himself."
Better to test life and have no fear of mistakes. I know from experience (Old age). Good to be fearless in life. One day you will wish you were. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[A. Amos]

A 19 year old with poetry about Man, simply brilliant you will go places my friend.

[Aehr]

Logic explained in an amazing way. Good job. I like the simplicity and straightforwardness of the poem.

[JordanIsaacSmith]

True words. Just look at the world today and you can see how true.

[Cory Firestine]

A great, well written poem Elinor. Great job. Yes, man's only weakness is himself. I totally agree.

[Ankur Sharma]

Man's only weakness
is himself.
i love your poem but and specially the above lines.

[Baby Ricochet]

Man's a savage. We're the same as we were back in the day when the Romans had public executions for entertainment

[Audrey Rey]

Man's only weakness truly is himself. I caught myself nodding intensly throughout the poem. Lovely rhythm.

[Elinor Williams]

Thank you so much! This is such a lovely comment xD ehh you made me smile :')

[Inspiring Writer]

Well written in your own words about "Reality of man", a poem's made under the too many thoughts of life about man or his nights.
artificial intelligence
without evidence
of our relevance
to our inheritance ...These 4 lines's got some kinda deep meaning in too many forms...and all forms're suited on it. Great write, your Imaginary seemed creative. Beautifully penned.

[Elinor Williams]

Exactly! It's hard when you feel guilt to forgive yourself. But the sun never apologises for shining and the moon never apologises for glowing. Nature is as nature is. thanks for the comment!

[Sharon Kim]

I like how you set this poem up with the quick lines. I like the repetition of the -ence/-ance lines. Yes, we are human and imperfect and that's okay.
Great job!