Eternal promise

Eternal promise

A Poem by Elin Luna

I was consumed by darkness  
My world was black 
No wish for light I had

Then you came 
You lit the candle 
Melted my frozen heart 

Lost colours returned 
And for the first time 
A happy smile I had 

The love we had 
Was strong 
And true 

But fate 
Is unfair 
And cruel 

You disappeared  
A severe disease
You had

A letter I received 
With a note 
And a ring

"This ring is part of our eternal promise"
"You are not alone i'll watch over you" 
"Because I love you" 

I read 
I cried 
And i smiled 

Every day I kiss the ring 
And with a smile I wisper 
"I love you"  

© 2014 Elin Luna


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The first two stanzas were very strong, and actually you stayed pretty strong throughout the entire poem I believe. A sad start, happy middle and bittersweet ending. I liked this one a lot, and the imagery in the beginning was very nice.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Stunning loving promise an eternal love these feeling will go on forever. Well written poem

Posted 10 Years Ago


Elin Luna

10 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Eternal NiCe....LoVeLy promise......!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Elin Luna

10 Years Ago

Thank you ^^

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Added on August 31, 2014
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