A love you may never see

I try to deny and defy 

This feeling of mine

I hate in order to get away 

But your gravity's to strong 

Every time i try to run

I'll rebound to this feeling of mine

I built a wall to distance myself 

But your smile easily made it fade away 

I'm caught in your honest eyes 

Desperately trying to get away 

You know nothing about this secret of mine

Will I ever tell you I wonder 

And if i really do 

Would my love for you ever come true 

Would you stay 

Or simply just walk away

Reviews

[MomzillaNC]

This piece has a nice meter, except that 3 line stanza. A lovely use of imagery, of the torment and ecstasy, the loneliness and longing, the fear and the hope of secret love.