The Jail Breaks

The Jail Breaks

A Story by Elijah
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A story of a Maniac Villain.

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Cops are mounted with guns all around. It is the most gaurded jail in the U.S.A., Miami iternational jail. I was making an attempt to go in for one reason, anyone I save owes me a favor that I won't forget. They will be my lifelong evil crew. I walk in as a airconditioning installer, and i'll walk out a gang leader. I had a gun in my tool box they didn't expect it. I walked in and told them I was here to fix the airconditioning. When nobody was around I started unlocking cages with my screwdriver. I gave everyone I could a tool for a weapon while I had a gun. I told them to go to the barracks and take out every cop they could. I went the other direction into the main office I wasn't leaving without a promise. I kicked open the door and the officer whipped out a gun, I did the same. I told him not to shoot and consider my offer. I said, "Turn your cops back and they shall not perrish but if you refuse you along with the rest shall die." He refused and amediatly I shot him down and took his credit cards and money. Now I annouced on the intercom all men that I have broken out meet me behind the jail in 3 minutes. In three minutes I told all my men that tonight we would rob geico insurence, use a crane and knock it to the ground. So that night we met at Geico's main office in Miami, Florida. As my men took out everyone in the building I headed up to the top floor to compromise with the owner of the business. I told him to transfer Geico's company account to mine and then with no idea what kind of money I could of made I through him out the window. To my disfortune he landed on the controls to my crane. I knew what was to happen so I shot my men knowing they didn't diserve money I earned and I was pumelled by the crane which led to the death of me, a great villain.

© 2009 Elijah


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Elijah
ignore all mistakes and please tell me want you think of this story of this super villain.

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Good Grief!! Lage, this does sound like an insane thing to do
a maniac villian to be sure ~ We'll talk about those mispelled
words later young man~overall, a good writE!!

Posted 15 Years Ago



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