The Ocean

The Ocean

A Poem by Elijah

The ocean's filled with fish

Which we eat on our dish

The aggresive sharks lurk the waters

Eating, and corning the fish, and slaughters

Coral reefs making the oceans beautiful

And minos swimming empty minded, they are so gullible

Boats keep killing helpless seals

We can't afford to make these reckless deals

Sea creatures are dieing, going extinct

How can we stop this, just stop and think

The oceans waters are in terrible conditions

How can they keep living in these horrid positions

 

 

 

© 2009 Elijah


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cool pome

Posted 15 Years Ago


This is really cool. I like the rhymes.

Posted 15 Years Ago


Elijah, your writing keeps getting better and better~

keep up the good work~
I like this one a lot~

Nana


Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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