A Family of Deer

A Family of Deer

A Poem by Elijah
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Nature

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A fam'ly of deer

Running through the forest rains

Refreshes their soul

© 2009 Elijah


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Great Haiku Elijah ~ You have Family spelled wrong

and need to omit/drop one syllable in the first line

Family is a 3 count syllable unless you want to write it fam'ly

I will accept it as 2 syllables and you wont have to drop any

THanks for the entry~ I really like this a lot~Nana

Posted 15 Years Ago



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