Snails

Snails

A Poem by Elijah
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A short poem about snails

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Snails snails,

Alot slower than whales

Riding along the ocean rails

 

They swim and swim the Atlantic rim

While the lights are becoming dim

 

They are very small,

Not that tall,

As they crawl and crawl and crawl

 

 

© 2009 Elijah


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I like it

Posted 15 Years Ago


Elijah, I really like this! It has a very nice flow and your subject matter is charming! Thank you for sharing this!

Empress

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Snails, reminds me of the way the post office delivers mail~slow~ very, very, slow lol

Posted 15 Years Ago


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Added on March 29, 2009

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