Jumbled UP

I want to sit here

snuggled up in blankets

comfy comfy blankets

and read

i want to read it all

all the words

and all the feelings

I want to feel it all

soak it up

and think my way through it

and be happy

fall asleep with a smile on myself.

which

is

actually

a possibility

because I have me

and that has to be enough.

But it all gets jumbled

in my head

sometimes.

I lose track

of what's real

and what's not.

My heart

won't lead me astray.

But my head will.

Your head will.

Heads do that,

they get all jumbled up.

Reviews

[Tinotenda Nyevedzanai]

"fall asleep with a smile on myself." this really made me smile, a very cosy poem fun to read and easy to relate to as a writer and a fan of writing - well done thanks for sharing

[Elie Marie]

thank you :)

[Rowan Crow]

I totally love this. I know exactly how this feels. Especially when I'm writing something. Sometimes, as I hunt for ideas, it all just comes in a rush, and I have to stem the intellectual tide of ideas. I think it is great that you also connected the the power of the heart to this. Thanks for writing!

[Elie Marie]

thank you :)

[Einstein Noodle]

i have a favorite line ... :)
"fall asleep with a smile on myself."
very enjoyable read .. stellar levels of comfy/cute .. and a great little contrast with the closing lines .. very easy flow in your free verse form!
E.

[Elie Marie]

thank you so much E :)