Shards

love heartbroken

I've tried to gather up

All my little shards of glass

To fit them back together 

To make me whole again 

But I can't

I can't

You hold too many of them

The ones I gave you

The stories

And hurts

And dreams 

The ones I shared with you

Because only you understood 

those parts of me 

You hold them

And now we're broken 

And I'm broken

I'm missing pieces

I'm missing you. 

Author's Note

any comments help :) thanks.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the honest and directness of the words.
"And now we're broken
And I'm broken
I'm missing pieces
I'm missing you. "
The above lines stood out. You create good vision and place of regret. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Falling Leaf.]

Longing and sad, a beautiful write and I hope all is well, thanks for sharing~

[Elie Marie]

thank you. All is... life? depends on the days.

[Einstein Noodle]

oh my! very emotive write .. love free verse .. i think it is all that ! .. breaks me heart .. a tiny shard has pierced it :( need another Guinness to forget ;)

E.

[Elie Marie]

aww thank you :)