Secret

Secret

A Poem by Eli_blu
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A poem.

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You watched me leave.

no matter how you tried,

you couldn't look away.

I watched you, too.

but you didn't see me.

I was hidden,

behind the shadow.

 

© 2009 Eli_blu


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Aww. It sounds like someone who is extremely shy who wants to encounter someone special. Good writing. :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


its alright i realy didnt get the point though, use more detail

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on March 26, 2009
Last Updated on April 5, 2009

Author

Eli_blu
Eli_blu

Salt Lake City, UT



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