Autumn Grief

Just a little tidbit.

 

Lonely words and desolate sketches,

all in vain and i should know.

you can say it in a million different ways,

but you can lie every time.

 

Reviews

[Patricia]

A perfect example for the saying less is more. There is quite a lot packed into those four lines. I really liked this piece. It was well writen and needed to be read several times through (always the mark of a good poem). Its quite complex despite its brevity. A great write! thanks for posting.