The Parts of Me

Song I wrote.

I Don't know what to do,
I don't know what to say.
I really don't care,
does it matter anyway?
I feel like im locked up,
Bottled up inside.
I can't do it anymore,
My feelings I can no longer hide.

Cause part of me
says: I don't know.
And part of me
says: I should just go.
And part of me
says: you're a waste.
Part of me
says: get out my face.

The parts of me.

Part of me is at a strong hold,
and doesnt want to break.
Part of me begins to realize,
All that is at stake.
Part of me has no clue
what to do.
What is the matter?
Is the problem me or you?
I just don't know what to do.

The parts of me.
The parts of me.

Reviews

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This is a great piece. I definitely read these lyrics like a song, which many few manage for me personally. There were only a couple of instances where I felt the lines were too short or too long, but this is only a very minor issue and might fit right in when sung aloud. These lyrics conveyed the emotional theme very well, just like other pieces you've written. Thank you for sharing all your writing so far and I look forward to reading more.