Here I Am

From when I took a stand for myself, aha.

Here I Am
For all to see.
I'm going to make that change.
And be who I want to be.

Here I Am
I'm stronger now.
I'll take that chance.
I'll find out how.

Here I Am
Fighting for my goal.
I'm becoming a better person.
It's fitting together as a whole.

Here I Am
I've learned from my mistake.
I know better now.
No more problems i will make.

Here I Am
My day will come
Where I can finally be happy
How far I've made it from.

Here I Am
For all to see
I've made that change
I'm who I want to be.

Reviews

[[Mackenzie]]

This is a simple poem, but it expresses your feelings well. It has a lot of easy to understand but powerful vocab. The only problem I have with this is the beat; it seems kind of irregular, but that might only be a problem because I like to read things aloud. Overall, the rhymes are good, and it's a great poem!

[Jenny Nelson]

I've read several of your poems and I enjoy them all. They're so open and honest. Simple and heartfelt and many can understand where you're coming from and identify with you. Basically put and this gets your feelings across quite well.

[Miah]

Cute