A Savior Such As You

A Savior Such As You

A Poem by elfenkate

 

 

A Savior Such As You

 

 

You always say that

"No one will Love you, but I do"

 

Suddenly it as if I am

Quasimodo ringing a

sad song on the high bells,

while you are something

better than Esmerelda.

 

A saint with golden

light offering up

salvation and love.

 

And I, I should drop to my knees

and kiss the feet, the hands, the rings

of my savior,

as you proudly pat my head

in acceptance of the offering.

 

But I were the creature that

would bow for you, if Love

were a truth in your heart,

if you were indeed glorious,

You would raise me to my feet and say,

 

"Do not worship me.

For your Love is as great

and worthy, not only of me

but of the world."

 

 

 

 

© 2008 elfenkate


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awesome, i loved it. description is very good.
got me thinking of the ancient Greeks and kings.

Nice job. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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