He Loves Me, He Loves Me Not

He Loves Me, He Loves Me Not

A Poem by Elexis123
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About an inanimate object

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Morning is here yet again
Another day to experience the world in another way
Today seems a bit different than others
It just feels like something is going to happen today
I don’t know
Ahhh I feel the cool breeze of the wind blowing my small body back and forth
It feels so good on my fragile skin
I am enjoying the day as it passes then all of a sudden my world goes dark
I see this big dark shadow like creature approaching me
I am scared but I stand tall
And I stand my ground LOL as if I really have a choice not to
I hear a loud sound come from the dark object
It sounds like a cry
Then suddenly I see a big drop of water fall from this being that looks like a raindrop
I realize then that this creature is really crying
I am over my fear of the being and now I feel concerned for the poor thing
I want to reach up and comfort it but I know that with my figure I could never reach it
Then all of a sudden I see the being reach for what seems to be me
It is
This being is reaching for me
For what I am unaware of
I hope it is not about to do the unthinkable
Please No
Stop don’t do it
Ugh no OMG
I can’t believe what just happened
This creature just dismantled me from the earth
Why would it do such a thing?
Why would it be so cruel and evil to someone it doesn’t even know?
Wait a minute
What is it doing to me now?
What’s going on?
NO!
STOP NOW!
Ouch ouch ooouuuccchhh
This being is now taking my body apart
And with each piece of my body being removed there are words being said
As I listen carefully it sounds like
He loves me he loves me not being repeated over and over again
And as the last of me is being plucked away the last words I hear are he loves me not
Then the being lets what is left of me float into the air and fly with the wind
 

© 2009 Elexis123


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Ouch indeed. i feel your pain. xx

Posted 15 Years Ago


This seems like it would make a good short story. Great imagination!

Posted 15 Years Ago



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