Picture This.

Picture This.

A Poem by Elexis123
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Close your eyes and picture this
Picture us
Together
Under the stars
At the top of the hill
Holding each other
Just you holding me and me holding you
Laying there
Enjoying each other’s company
You kiss my lips softly
And whisper to me in my ear those three words
I love you
And in that moment my heart melts with a sense of joy
Joy and happiness that out of all the people in the world you chose me to love
A feeling of security and protection rushes through my body as you and I watch the stars
Watch as life passes us by without a care in the world
Except for each other
Now open your eyes and tell me what you see
Me right here by your side
Where I want to be forever
Watching the stars pass by

© 2009 Elexis123


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Memories.....Thanks for bringing them to the surface again. I like this....well done.

Posted 15 Years Ago


i think this is absolutely wonderful and just beautiful. splendid imagery and perfect piece in freeverse. oh it made my heart sing. i must now call the other half of my soul and tell him i love him. thank you for sharing this heartwarming piece.

~Dixie~

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Elexis123
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Memphis, TN



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