Blue Dreamer

Blue dreamer, it has been a while
Since you really had a dream.
You'll find your hope somehow.
I'm always on your team.
Don't you dare feel alone.
Oh blue dreamer, stay strong.
Just know you have a home.
You've had a place all along.

Blue dreamer, dream a little dream.
I know if you believe
You'll find your way.
The stars are in your eyes.
Blue dream don't you run away.
Your dreamer is written in the skies.

Blue dreamer, keep your senses clear.
Stay true to what you want.
You'll find there is nothing to fear
Nightmares are ment to haunt.
Just make sure not to dwell.
Struggles get better in time.
You'll learn if you fail.
Try, try, try again so one day you'll be fine.

Blue dreamer, dream a little dream.
I know if you believe
You'll find your way.
The stars are in your eyes.
Blue dream don't you run away.
Your dreams are written in the skies.

You blue dreamer, dream in any shade.
You will never fade
If you follow your dreams.
As long as you try in my eyes you succeed.
Cause you're my blue dreamer,
My crutch leaner,
Blue dreamer.

Blue dreamer, dream a little dream.
I know if you believe
You'll find your way.
The stars are in your eyes.
Blue dream don't you run away.
Your dreams are written in the skies.

Reviews

[Avanthika]

sir , i liked your writing , but there's one thing that i didnt understand, what actually you mean when you say blue dreamer . What meaning does blue convey in that, and the stanza "blue dreamer, dream a little dream...........in the skies" have been repeated three times which i think will bore the readers everytime they read .

[E.G. James]

Blue dreamer represents someone who has losing hope or has given up in there dreams completely. I dad write it to be a song, that's why the chorus is repeated. Do you think it would be better as a regular poem?
Thank you so much
(And I'm a girl, but no worries)

[emipoemi]

So solemn, so sublime, so profound! Another gem of a song! Well done!

("Blue dream, don't you run away".....isn't it supposed to be "Blue dreamer, don't you run away"?.....that line had me a bit confused....)

[E.G. James]

Wow can't believe I didn't see that thank you.

[Priscilla Nishi]

Thats a lot of good advice..a very nice piece..I like your style of writing :)

[E.G. James]

Thank you so much! :)

[Avanthika]

hi dear,
if its a been a song then it had better those lines , but when you show that as a poem , i prefer not to repeat those stanzas every time.

[E.G. James]

Ok thank you