Mad Girl

Mind wide open in the night, 

Hardly alive in the day. 

This is not ideal for my life. 

Changed some of my ways but most habits stay. 

But I haven't really changed my ways. 

I thought to change my ways. 

I've wanted to change my ways. 

I haven't changed them. 

I walk a thin line, I walk a real thin line. 

I crossed a thin line, I broke a thin line. 

But I promise imma try. 

Promise imma try this time. 

I have to live this lie. 

I must be so so mad. 

I'm a sad girl, I'm a bad girl, I'm a mad girl. 

I'm stuck in this world. 

I'm a sad girl, I'm a bad girl, I'm a mad girl. 

I'm stuck in this world. 

I am just a mad girl. 

There is a trill both right and wrong gives.

keeping in all I feel and do. 

I know that this ain't no way to live. 

And I know I must find something new. 

But I haven't really changed my ways. 

I thought to change my ways. 

I've wanted to change my ways. 

I haven't changed them. 

I walk a thin line, I walk a real thin line. 

I crossed a thin line, I broke a thin line. 

But I promise imma try. 

Promise imma try this time. 

I have to live this lie. 

I must be so so mad. 

I'm a sad girl, I'm a bad girl, I'm a mad girl. 

I'm stuck in this world. 

I'm a sad girl, I'm a bad girl, I'm a mad girl. 

I'm stuck in this world. 

I am just a mad girl. 

I'm gonna change for the good, I'm going to change for me. 

Oh just you wait and see. 

I'm not a bad girl. 

Watch me change my world. 

I walk a thin line, I walk a real thin line. 

I crossed a thin line, I broke a thin line. 

But I promise imma try. 

Promise imma try this time. 

I have to live this lie. 

I must be so so mad. 

I'm a sad girl, I'm a bad girl, I'm a mad girl. 

I'm stuck in this world. 

I'm a mad girl, I'm a mad girl, I'm a mad girl. 

I'm stuck in this world. 

I am just a mad girl.

Reviews

[Priscilla Nishi]

It sounds like rap :D lol..I really liked it..especially the way you have used repetition for the 'thin line' part..
Some of the lines are very clever..NYC..

[E.G. James]

Lol :p Thank you.it really means a lot :D