Tear less is not possible

Tear less is not possible

A Poem by ElenoraAurellia

last night i found out

there is no such thing

as running out of tears

laying in bed

i realized

i won't get over you

this feeling won't end

it may die down

i might stop crying every night before i go to sleep

but there will always be a stab in my chest when i see you

i will always lose my appetite when i think of you

and my dreams of you

will always leave me in agony when i wake up

because no matter what i do

you haunt me in every way

you are in everything

and i am weeping from the sorrow you are causing

© 2016 ElenoraAurellia


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The poem is quite sorrowful, the tone and the feeling it sets is all something that is praiseworthy. If you really want corrections, I believe (because most people call it their style), you should us upper case letters at the end of each line and every i should be 'I'. This is all I can suggest for now.
You write more! I'd love to read more! :D

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The poem is quite sorrowful, the tone and the feeling it sets is all something that is praiseworthy. If you really want corrections, I believe (because most people call it their style), you should us upper case letters at the end of each line and every i should be 'I'. This is all I can suggest for now.
You write more! I'd love to read more! :D

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Hi, I'm not good at correcting, but I like the feeling in this.

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ElenoraAurellia
ElenoraAurellia

Grand Rapids, MI



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