Reality

Reality

A Poem by Eleise Trenda

My body isn’t mine. The label I was saving called “VIRGIN” was ripped away from my skin, leaving me torn and bloody  

-Reality

© 2017 Eleise Trenda


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I am yet to come across a " lost virginity" most of the girls I grew up with handed it to a fella on a knickerless platter when full of drink. Very few saved it for the " special love" of their life.
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i got goosebumps after reading this. your words are a dose of reality. no pun intended

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Eleise Trenda

6 Years Ago

Hahaha! Love it! Thanks so much!

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Added on October 20, 2017
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Eleise Trenda
Eleise Trenda

Longview, WA



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I am a 15 years old aspiring singer/songwriter and writer from Washington state. Poetry and music have gotten me through a lot of tough times in my life and I want to be able to share my story and mus.. more..

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