Why?

Why is being like a stick pretty?

I need to know

Why can't being a healthy way be pretty?

I would like to know.

 

Why is covering your face with makeup  beautiful

When it's not even them

Why do some people think there better?

When were all the same

 

 

 

Author's Note

Ignore grammar and spelling probelms. This is just a shoet poem I wrote off the top of my head. What do you think? I think it needs an ending still.

Reviews

[TWISTED NIGHTMARE]

its fine the way it is but if you add more it wont change, it will still be a beautiful poem...i love it for the reason being i ask that all the time and im sure people want to know the reason why that is only beautiful and not another persons true self..

[Mari-Sweet]

I agree with this. People come in all shapes and sizes. Everybody can't be skinny. There's nothing wrong with wearing a little make-up. But if you don't look right without it, that means you're wearing too much. This was a very good poem. It points out human nature.

[Vertigoingnowhere]

i like it a lot good work :)

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

I think it could use a ending too, thought the way that you have it now, does seem to leave a cliffhanger of its own leading it to be thought thinking. I like this.

[Death Girl]

I used to think that I was ugly and now I wear makeup and I think I am pretty. That is only because i look like my birth mom and i hate her. I like this poem. I like short poems that don't take to long to get to the point.

[HoodLife]

Its really good to me! :)

[paradise]

short and simple its true some girls are too dumb to realize what beautiful is and they think skinny is pretty