Before you came along

Before you came along

I was dead inside

My heart was beating

But I felt nothing

 

Before you came along

I could never do anything that had to do with love

Because it hurt too much

And made me think of things, I never want to think of again

 

Yes before you came along

I was a mess

But you now your here

And you knew how to fix me.

Author's Note

Ignore grammar and spelling problems. What do you think?? I wrote it off the top of my head so it's not as good as some of my other pieces.

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

I actually think this is really good... it has feeling and emotion to it, i like how you do that in your poems, you seem to do feelings and emotion really well. I love the middle stanza. Truth speaks nicely in this with pain and hope. I really like this one.

[TawnyBlueStar]

writing stuff off the top of your head are always the best :D
really good, love it :)

[trippy kitty]

Dude this was awesome. Like really awesome. I could get what you mean and I could relate a lot. Good job :)

[Death Girl]

It is good. I can relate to this. This poem is truely awsome.