Fake friends

You say your my friend

And that your on my side

But I know better

Once I turn around,

Your knife will be in my back

 

You say your my friend

And I can share everything with you

But I know you will just take them

And run back to your real friends

To share everything I said

 

Now that i'm on to your dirty tricks

You have let me alone

But I know that you won't be

My last fake friend

Author's Note

Ignore grammar and spelling problems. What did you think??

Reviews

[skigirl]

I feel like this a lot. Like there are people that will act like they are your best friends until they are with others and then all they do is talk, talk, talk, about you. I wish I could find some true friends!!! I can tell you put a lot of heart and thought about it. You did amazing.

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Love this. You wrote the situation of the truth and the feelings that happen to many people... to a good percent of perfection. I like how you write about subjects that speak that truth and emotion about problems people go through with friends, love, etc. Very nicely said in your poems. There is grammar and spelling in your poems, but aside from that, what the poems say, is enough to ignore it because of how powerful the poem speaks to the problems, emotions, truth...etc. Nice, really nice.

[HeIsWe]

I like it

[Death Girl]

WOW. everyone in there life ends up having a fake friend. I've had so many fake friends that I almost killed myself over.

[Andrea Vargas]

Lovely and hatefully sinister(: well done

[idk]

To Ibreez Shablkhez: What would you call it then??

To everyone else: Thanks!

[Ibreez Shabkhez]

Expression... wonderful expression, bu not poetry.

[Ryan Miller]

Wow. This was quite beautiful. I really dug this. As you know, i've been there before. Quite a bit.

[The Shadow of the Dawn]

truer words have never been spoken,
great poem

[B.Ann.E]

I've been there. I used to feel pretty s****y about it, but one day I just stopped caring. I realized, how other people treat you is not a reflection of you - but of them. I am my own person. I no longer allow, how other people treat me, affect who I am - and how I treat others. I'm the happy goth! (Pissing off other goths, with my smile, happiness & the pink-cute accessories on my goth clothes.)