Why her?

I just don't understand

I may be smiling

But inside i'm dying

I'm happy you found love

But why her and not me?

 

I did everything in my power

To show you we were a match

Still you go with her, I'm happy for you

But why her and not me?

 

I hung out with your friends

till they approved of me

But she just walked in your life

Why her and not me?

 

I know you won't listen to me

Since your under that witch's spell

But I need to try just one more time

Why her and not me?

Author's Note

Ignore grammar problems and spelling problems cause I don't give a shit about them right now. I just needed to get some feelings out

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

You got the feelings out well in this, a good vent, upset and yet confused, disappointed... this poem is well said. I like this a lot with all the feelings, such truth.

[Death Girl]

I can totaly relate to this. your thinking to yourself something like what does she have or do that i don't or didn't do.

[Stella Robins]

True true gurl

[Alex Miller<3]

This is great Sunny I can tell you're hurt by this girl who can just walk into his life when you basically had to go over obstacles to get into his heart..I can see what you question it

[Ryan Miller]

I dug this. You write a lot like me, just straight emotion. Keep it up!

[LoveYourself]

wow... :/ < / 3 ik how u feel....im sorry ur going thru this...
~missy~

[Mikel Branch]

exactly how I've felt several times in my life. Excellent display of how you feel.

[TWISTED NIGHTMARE]

this was amazing....true emotion

[trippy kitty]

F*****g fantastic poem, youre an excellent poet, bla bla bla.

[i like people]

i loved this. so much. like, oh my god.